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This is just amazing! I love it (No homo) <3
I think the drops could probably use some variation, they sound kinda... Bland? If you get what I mean. Maybe some OTT on it? idk... (U probably could have it on there but I dont recognize it) Anyways, The BPM Change for the last drop was... just no... Alright personally I dislike it when songs change BPM, unless if its done extremely well. (Just my opinion.) And I do think the mixing could use some work too. But anyways, my positives. I really like the Intro alot! And the melodies were something that got me very good too! I think the buildups are pretty cool too. Kind of gave me that hype feeling in me! Anyways keep at it! Your doing well!
Thanks bro <3
about the drop lead I don't think it would be good to put OTT
Hits pretty hard dude!
Alright... So the plucks non-drop parts are way to loud... Maybe try and turn those down a bit. Something I dislike about the track is the BPM Changes, I think the whole track should be in one BPM. I think it sounds good at 150 BPM. Because it doesn't sound to rapid. 180 BPM is really fast. I think the mixing is Okay? Could use some work. But anyways I really enjoy the drops when they go to 150 BPM. The kind of old dubstep feeling is pretty cool! Improvements can be made though! Anyways keep at it man <3
Also Congratulations for the 200 followers man! I knew you were gonna make it soon!
This song is one of the worst I have made lmao
P.S. The tempo changes were my idea (cuz its hardcore and dubstep so I would choose 2 bpms)
I tried making my own melodies but its hard but one day ill get the hang of it ;)
Alright... The mixing does need work. But the thing is, the chimes are pretty off key... They dont sound right with the leads and stuff, and idk I do think they sound kinda weird (my opinion) maybe them sounding weird is just me idk... Also the buildups do sound kinda distorted and also distorts the melody a little bit... anyways not too bad tho!
Alright... So the melodies sound really distorted and dont go together with anything. The risers need to be changed out. They dont sound good at all... The drops dont go with the melodies at all... Its all just off key, And the mixing really needs alot of work. Also the drops need alot of work too. So this review is not really anything against you. Its just me giving my opinion on this song.
~Thank you
ill follow that for my next song
yup this sucks
Edit: check this https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/949465
Yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh Booooooooooooiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Lit remix ngl tho - xd
thanks man!
Great work on this track! -ELM
If I could, ill have sex with this. <3
I’d take Lauren Jauregui as my wifey <333
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